bring me death

Canst I, hold thy hand?

Pray for thou, just keep thy love alive

Canst say farewell my darling, we understand

Dead inside, betwixt all vanes don’t believe.

 

May hearts burst into flames?

Tell a story without holding a tear

Thou art done with thy games

Just bring me death or bring me fear

 

Blood may pour down thy cheek

Piercing thy skin with sharp blade

Ravens eat thou in a creek

Thy skin would just fade

 

All bone no sight of thy skin

Thy bring death, of sand in a tin.

Reviews

[FocusedAmnesia]

Good read. The language distracted me for the first line or so because I'm weird like that, but I enjoyed this piece

[Sami Khalil]

A dark poem but good........................

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you sir :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................