where are you?

where are you?

A Poem by Janice Fronek(red.panda)

I have been waiting for so long

just a moment together I wish we had

but I was wrong

you're nothing but a relationship that trued bad

 

you treated me wonderfully

but I didn't know it'll be soon than over

you said i was you most beautiful

just got harder when the days got older

 

babe was us no more

you're just another love

one i'll never go back for

so where are you my angel from above?

© 2013 Janice Fronek(red.panda)


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Apart from elegant typing mistakes, I see in front of me a poem with emotion. I see something that clearly had to be written down from the heart. I must admit , that the message is not original, but the poem is , because you gave out your own personality and feelings.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Janice Fronek(red.panda)

11 Years Ago

yes i did and thank you
i thught for sure i reviewed this! grrrr forgetful mind i love it bestie!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Janice Fronek(red.panda)

11 Years Ago

it's okaky
i liked it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Janice Fronek(red.panda)

11 Years Ago

thanks
deaths calling

11 Years Ago

your welcome

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Janice Fronek(red.panda)
Janice Fronek(red.panda)

antigo, WI



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Hello there my name is Janice Fronek. I had been writing for five years now and I had been very successful in writing. I am very over protective of my writing and the format that I write in. My favo.. more..

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