can't take no more

can't take no more

A Poem by Janice Fronek(red.panda)

I just can't stand

I'm falling all over again

there's blood on my hand

I'm stuck back in pain

 

I have no blade

nothing to cut my wrist

pain won't fade

I want to see go down my wrist

 

this is a way I feed

a way to deal with stress

it's a need

it's more than less

 

mind is only on suicide

thoughts of death

I want to kill myself inside

for I take one last breath

© 2013 Janice Fronek(red.panda)


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Second stanza, last line "I want to see go down my wrist." I think you meant "I want to see blood go down my wrist" Written well, but harsh stuff? Are you okay?

Chaos_Collector

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Janice Fronek(red.panda)
Janice Fronek(red.panda)

antigo, WI



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Hello there my name is Janice Fronek. I had been writing for five years now and I had been very successful in writing. I am very over protective of my writing and the format that I write in. My favo.. more..

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