angel of darkness

Screams, and death were everywhere. Sounds of burning fire was making me go insane, Just the thought being so close to death made my heart feel pain. Tears rolled down my face like rain, and my soul seem to be gone. My mouth was tabed shut, and my body was numb. I was getting tired, so I closed my eyes

            From the moment I fell asleep, I thought I had seen an angel. She had beautiful blue eyes like the ocean. Her hair was blond, and it shined it glod. Her skin was white as snow, as if she was dead. "follow your heart", she had whrisper

            When I opened my eyes, I had seen bright lights. So bright to the point where I couldn't keep my eyes open. I heard a straige sound, it made me lightheaded. My body was becoming very weak, and my mind swimming around with thoughts of what was going on, or where am I.

            I most of past open again because whenI opened my eyes, I was in a differnet place. I started to move my toes, my fingers, and tried to get up. "where am I?" I asked myself as I looked around me to see where I was. The walls were dripping with water, and the ceiling seem to be made out of rock.

            From the moment I stand up, I nearly fell to the ground. I started to walk very slowlyin case I fall. When I reached a wall, I put my hand on the wall. It was very hot. So I took my hand of every fast. My hand was burt just a little bit, and it hurt. "oach" I had said very softly.

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

you are such a poet even in your stories you rhyme lol

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

LOL Thanks

[beautiful dreamer]

your welcome lol