Darkness of the world

Fear in every eye
Blood in every hand
Death is above the sky
Making sure we understand

 

Darkness fills the sky with no light
No beautiful sun shine
But we smile with delight
As we hear the voices in our minds

 

This world is what we call hell
Some say it's heaven of death
It's the Devil's hell
where evil takes thier last breath

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

Terrific poem! I like how descriptive it is.Good job!

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :D

[Justatinyspark]

'death is above the sky' and the later 'heaven of death' and 'evil's last breath' all work really nicely together to create the impression thateven the devil is ashamed to live on our world. I really like it :')

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :)