Voices

Voices

A Poem by Janice Fronek(red.panda)

In the darkest hour

Heart beats of pain

Pouring blood over towers

Reminding us we are insane again

 

Losing our minds

We hear strange voices

Rolling upon our minds

Can’t get them out, those voices

 

I’m becoming afraid

Can thee please help me survive

 I’m losing my mind

Help me stay alive

 

Don’t let me fade away

Take my hand

Help me stay

Please help me understand

 

These voices put fear in me

Hurting my every bone

If I could only hear what’s there to see

When I’m in pain and alone?

© 2013 Janice Fronek(red.panda)


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Alot of emotion well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Almost the feel of lyrics

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great and Ill help you if you want :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


Janice Fronek(red.panda)

11 Years Ago

okay :) and thanks
This flows very well, also I like that is very dark and shows our insecurities through the voices, loneliness can lead to many things one of them can be hearing those voices in our head...great piece of write you managed to pin here...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Janice Fronek(red.panda)

11 Years Ago

thank you :D

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Janice Fronek(red.panda)
Janice Fronek(red.panda)

antigo, WI



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Hello there my name is Janice Fronek. I had been writing for five years now and I had been very successful in writing. I am very over protective of my writing and the format that I write in. My favo.. more..

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