suicide emotions

My mind is in a wide twist

I cut my arm with a razor

Watching blood pour down my wrist

My eyes burn for a savior

 

Emotions fill up inside

Reminding me I’m close to death

There’s nowhere to hide

So I shall take my last breath

 

I cry for my life to end

My heart is in pain

Everything’s is not okay so I can’t pretend

There’s no way to save me again

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Deep dark piece. I hope your days get brighter.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

me too thanks

[TiffanyLynn]

This is wonderfully written. I love the depth and meaning to each of those words. I love reading your poems of which are filled with such emotion and love. I understand these, and it helps so much to understand that I am not alone. Thank you for sharing

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

your welcome tiffany :)

[AK]

Janice, no, there is a better path! Thou must not do thus :(
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger, Janice. It is always darkest before Dawn. Wait until your Dawn cracks. Please~
AK

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

idk :/

[AK]

But again, it's your decision. You have the reins to run your own life :)
Make it worth the journey, sweetie. You are such a sweet girl and a talented poetess. Use your fortes to make the best of your life.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[AK]

:)

[beautiful dreamer]

don't you dare leave me.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:'(