want to give thee my all

Moments so far apart

I wit I’ll fall for thee once again

I just want thee to have my heart

And take hence of all pain

 

I shall give thee my all

I shall promise thee shall never be cold

Even when thy heart falls

I shall be thither to hold

 

I wit thee lost faith in me

But I want to gain thy love

Dost anything for thee to see

Even if I bequeath my soul above

Reviews

[Nick.B]

Very emotional piece, the last stanza i found to be heartbreaking, interesting style on this piece love the composure with "wit, thee..." great job

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :D

[beautiful dreamer]

very nice

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :D