Wit love

Overmany hearts

I beseech thee

I shall love thee nevermore tarry heart

Naught shall take thee

 

Canst love betwixt fall?

Shall seek of thee, forevermore love

Thou art my love, shall give all

Naught onuppan to prove

 

Shall midst of love be pudh underneath?

Shall canst I hold thee forever?

We shall trow of love beneath

Thou and I shall love forever

Reviews

[Courtney]

Very romantic and emotional. I really liked how you used the words such as "Thou and art.'' It reminded me of Shakespeare. Nice work.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :D

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Interesting, I love your usage of Old English:)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you :D

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Welcome:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nicely written piece

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :)