Our dauntless love

Shall not discourse thy tempter my dauntless love

For evermore thy shall not implore

For thy angels shall not fall above

From every waking moment you’ll deplore

 

Every broken tear shall rue

Thou art, my love for tomorrow

I shall discourse to adore you

To a waking moment of sorrow

 

 Thy day thy tempter is in chains

Our dauntless love shall sore

For he will be insane

But won’t put surcease to our heart’s deepess core

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice. Good one miss Darkangel.

[Courtney]

I like this poem, very deep and full of meaning. The first paragraph I especially like. Good write.

[Fang]

i love this, i really do good work with it ^^

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank thee :D

[Fang]

np

[beautiful dreamer]

i love your rhyme!

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

well thank thee my fere :)

[beautiful dreamer]

lol your welcome!