let myself go

I let my heart flow by

For every word I wrote down

I let my feelings fly

for my mind roll around

 

letting myself inside

tore me apart

knowing I'm the reason I cry

reason for my broken heart

 

the way my eyes burn

are from my own tears

my own way I burn

from the feelings I fear

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

wow. this one is a head tilter, left me speechless

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

ya i know, and no one ever said that before about any of me poems :D

[beautiful dreamer]

reallY? that is crazy cause alot of your poems leave me speechless. you are a very good writer

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you sweetie :) i never knew i was that good

[beautiful dreamer]

your very welcome. well now you do

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:D

[Baby Ricochet]

Very emotionally descriptive. Great job

[Jordan's Back]

The Pain Wont last, You will survive. Great expression

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks ^^

[MandaBear]

Wow. Sad but a really good write

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

Thanks :3