Need a savior

tears fall

my eyes burn

i have nothing at al

but the scars i burn

 

my body is weak

my heart is broken

my soul won't seek

my hope was taken

 

i cut my hand

split into two

seems no one understands

need a savior that will do

 

someone to heal me

fill my wildest dreams

make my world to be

one with no screams

 

were is my hope

it was inside

but with it i couldn't cope

knowing my mind is on suicide

 

gotta get it out of my mind

put it away

have my hope, i'll be fine

my savior will be here one day

Reviews

[Overrated-World]

What a deep and meaningful piece.
Its lovely but at the same time sad and brings strong emotion.
Im always here to talk. I can relate to this.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you

[Lost in Wonderland]

Very good, emotional piece with nice flow. I hope you find your savior soon.
God bless

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks that means a lot

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem at all, if you ever wanna talk I'm here:)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Any time girl :)

[beautiful dreamer]

aw honey..

[beautiful dreamer]

i am sorry.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[beautiful dreamer]

i wish there was more i could say. but i'm plum squat speechless. i am always here if you need to talk though

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks, today my friend nate asked me why i have scars on my hand so i gaved him my jounal and after he read it he gaved me a big hug and told he's going to be here for me. So he gave me his number so i can call him later. it made my day :)

[beautiful dreamer]

good. i'm glad you have somebody in flesh