dead rose

Just like a rose

Slowly dies

Everyday death is close

Every moment is a lie

 

My steam is strong

But my mind is weak

Dragging me on is wrong

I drop every time I speak

 

No one sees before it’s too late

Death appears behind us all

For us is a world of hate

Death will always all

 

Every rose is dead

No beat from a heart

When blood is red

I will fall apart

Reviews

[AK]

This poem is really good:) it bears strength of thought and the ink of a very talented writer:)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

awes thank that just made my day :D

[AK]

:) anytime

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:D

[AK]

Anything else you want me to review? I would love to read more from you:)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

okay i'll send you them okay

[AK]

Ok:)

[Jordan's Back]

Another Dark yet powerful write.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you so much

[rnuff]

this is wonderful.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[sithlordjp]

this is beautiful, thanks for sharing.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

you're welcome