don't let me die

i wrote this someone that i love so much and im scared that they'll leave me with nothing but hate, no love, and a broken heart filled with so much pain

Save me

Before it’s too late

Let me be

I don’t want to feel hate

I just want you to see

 

Don’t let my heart die

Don’t make me brake

You had made me cry

Set my words to take

Please don’t lie

 

Can’t take any pain

Burn me to love

This feeling can’t regain

For send me to heaven above

For I will die in pain

 

Hold me to be near

Take my hand

Don’t let me cry a tear

Please understand

I need you to be hear

 

Your words are my to hold

Your heart is mine

Our love is never cold

I want us to be more than fine

I want a love to hold

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

A deep write, filled with sorrowful devotion. Excellent job!

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[Jordan's Back]

Your welcome.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

^^