tears still fall

My eyes burn

Nothing, I’ll see

For I shall burn

Set pain on me

 

My tears fall

For the one I love

I’ll show my all

Set my heart on stars above

 

Why did you go?

Left me with fear

Don’t know what to do

All is left are my tears

Reviews

[Ban Heo]

i would try to extend this poem into a longer one with more descriptive language. Maybe even try to write a sonnet with it.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

okay i will try that than