Marty why?

Where are you, I want my heart

Remember what it used to be

The scars are on me

On me

 

Forgive me, my lost love

Forgive all hearts to prove

 

To prove

My love, my heart, my lost

 

The voice of your name makes me tumble

Makes me fall to a drum rumble

 

Is there a right way doing things wrong

My words are far from strong

So guide me through

Hold my hand

I want you to understand

 

Understand I’m to scared to say

For everyday I pray

 

Sail all what you have to say

Go on, all is done

For all your words are gone

 

Remember what it used to be

The scars are on me

On me

 

Is it the way these things goes

I got my friends and I got my foes

 

I want you to feel the pain

The love that I’ll never regain

The painful hearts

The words that tore me apart

 

The voice of your name makes me tumble

Makes me fall to a drum rumble

 

Why can’t you see?

I want your love to be

 

To be

 

I try to push this all away

But you can’t help but say

The words that make me fall

 

Why hurt me

Why can’t you see?

 

Sail all what you have to say

Go on, all is done

For all your words are gone

 

Remember what it used to be

The scars are on me

On me

 

Is it the way these things goes

I got my friends and I got my foes

 

I want you to feel the pain

The love that I’ll never regain

The painful hearts

The words that tore me apart

 

Understand I’m to scared to say

For everyday I pray

 

Understand I’m to scared to say

For everyday I pray

 

I want you to feel

And never heal

For every broken love

You tore apart hearts of angels above

 

Angels above

 

Why now

 

So many

So many ways to say

I love you,

I hate you,

I miss you

 

I wish I’ll let go

But there’s nothing for me to do

 

To do…

 

Understand I’m to scared to say

For everyday I pray

 

Understand I’m to scared to say

For everyday I pray

 

For everyday I pray

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

wow this is amazing. i copied it onto my desktop so i could read a couple more times last night. its a great poem :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

your very welcome my friend

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Definitely a song. Great rhythm and rhyme.. I've a rhythm machine here. This would be good to weave a pattern with.

[ℰmerald ⚓]

this reminds me "don't go" by bring me the horizon, it would be a great song with the instrumental of it! c:

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

i never heard that song

[ℰmerald ⚓]

look it up it would be great :D

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

i did and i like it :)