one of love

to you I love

for all truth to

for give to prove

all hearts to you

 

one shall not die

for you is "no" death

"no" painful cry

for all of last breath

 

hold me

for all hearts

you are to be

"never" one apart

 

pray for one

"not" for two

for all is alone

give a love to

 

hold on thy place

one never far

close to our grace

"or" on a musical star

 

always here

"never" gone

heart beats are near

for all love is done

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

Very Catchy, Like a song, This could be converted to lyrics in a heart beat, and its very deep and has a enchanting element about it, wonderful.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[Caitlynn Cusick]

very good mah dear

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[Draven]

Great work

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah, young love's a beautiful thing. Sweet poem. Thank you for posting this

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

^^

[Writer *78*]

Has the sense of a romeo and juliet essence here. Its almost as if it would be something that juliet would say to romeo [before he drank the poison] At at least the first four stanza's seem like that to me. Impressive none the less. Great Work.

-Writer *78*

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

think you so much, I was so bored in english class it just popped in my head just like that I haven't thought of something just like that in a long time :)

[beautiful dreamer]

it's very shakespeare i like it :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

i'm not done yet lol and think you :)

[beautiful dreamer]

it's still very shakespeare, which is a good thing! shakespheare was a great writer lol

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

I know lol my favorite poem is A lover' Complaint

[beautiful dreamer]

mhm :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

I posted on hear

[beautiful dreamer]

i saw that :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

his word are so powerful I just glow when I read it ^^ I just love poems exspeaully when flow so smoothly :D I feel so a live

[beautiful dreamer]

spoken like a true writer lol

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:)

[beautiful dreamer]

:D