A child that never been born

this poem is about my miscarrige that happened a few weeks ago

She/He never had love

never been alive

she/he was taken by god

was only here for 6 weeks and died

 

everynight I cry

hoping she/he was here

I should've tried

but I failed for she/he to be near

 

why is it this way?

I wanted someone to love

Someone that would stay

someone from above

 

I wanted that child to be

I wish I could hold

keep her/she love near me

but the days were cold

 

could only pray

wait for the perfect moment

and hope she/he would stay

Reviews

[Draven]

I have always dreamed of having a little girl. My little Rosalie. I feel like I know her already, and I love her so much. The though of losing her makes me tremble. Of all the gifts in life which we as mortals can recieve, a child is the greatest. To lose one is perhaps the greatest torment.

[Quill~]

You write with a heavy heart. I am saddened by what you have gone through. Great work, well done.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you

[Quill~]

:) You're welcome.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:)

[Sasha]

Poem is sad, but wonderfully written.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you

[Nick.B]

Sorry to hear that, very sad poem, all who finished writing can feel your emotions...very sad...again sorry about the loss

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

First of all, my condolences. Second, wonderful poem. You did a very good job of conveying your emotions through this piece. I can feel the pain you must have felt. Again I'm sorry for your loss of your baby:(

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

Thank you hun

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Your welcome:)

[imdvader]

wow! a very nice poem.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thinks :)

[Courtney]

You did a very good job of making the reader feel your sadness. The loss of someone you love is never easy to endure.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you

[AK]

This poem is really sad:( you succeeded in tranferring your sadness into the reader's hearts. The rhyming scheme accentuates the beauty of this poem, keep writing!

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :)

[AK]

Anytime:)

[DarkDaughter]

Very sad poem. I'm sorry for your baby ://

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[MystiqFairy]

This brought me to tears. I have been struck by the loss of a baby also. I am truly sorry.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you :')

[C.C. Marx]

You have my sympathy and my prayer :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you