All I need

So far away

So close to love

All I need is you to stay

Hold from a star above

 

Angels sing

In a world with no pain

Hear as the bell rings

From the voices of rain

 

No more tears

No more hate

You leaving I fear

There fore I hold onto your faith

Reviews

[ℰmerald ⚓]

I like this c: after reading your sad poems i hope you the best

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you :D

[Boy of the red]

very very good! i hope whoever this is really does stay.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

well so far he is staying by myside :)

[Boy of the red]

good :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:)

[Writer *78*]

This has alot of depth you it as one may see. I see that alot of your poetry turns out that way its not a bad thing its one thing that many writers can not do or come close to doing. It should be commended. Nice Work.

-Writer *78*

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks ^^

[beautiful dreamer]

beautifully written, i love when you rhyme! :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[beautiful dreamer]

yup :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

^^

[Moon]

This is beautiful ! Great job ! :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

Thank you ^^

[Moon]

You are welcome

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

^^