Kill me before I kill you

know what's inside

Instead of trying to fight

Love can't seen outside

Leaving unknown feelings isn't right

 

Me and you should be strong

Even if it's a bad day

 

Best to not have anything go wrong

Even if we go our own way

Forget all what was bad

Outside is what we see

Rather then being sad

Everyday I'm graceful for you and me

 

Is it love?

 

Kill me before hate

Is it a feeling for above

Look at me before you take

Love was ours

 

Yesterday was a different day

Other than looking at flowers

Understand what I'm trying to say

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good title. Got my attention. Love can feel like a battlefield.
"Rather then being sad
Everyday I'm graceful for you and me"
I tell people. Count to ten before before speaking foolish words and doing a dumb act. We pay for our deeds good and bad. I like the complete poem. Make me think. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:)

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Amazing poem I can tell this has a painful story behind it, you put your emotions from the experience into a beautiful piece. Great work, a good relationship will come for you, you seem nice and your very talented, also with your drawings. c:

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you :D

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Your very welcome c:

[Writer *78*]

This has got the essence of a bad relationship or termoil written all over it. So much emotion in this poem its flowing off the page. Impressive work.

-Writer *78*

[beautiful dreamer]

beautiful poem angel :) i loooove your writing ;)