Bright

This poem was writen for a beautiful girl and she is one of my friends :D

Lights that glow

shines on what's beautiful

for you is what makes my heart flow

your smile makes a day wonderful

so the angel sings when the wind blows

 

Your beauty is so bright

your heart is like a flower

that blooms in the morning and sleeps at night

for you I think for hours

when I wake in the morning light

 

 

Reviews

[Faffy]

ahh, true friendship is golden is it not? =) your friend is truly blessed with a friend like you

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks ^^

[C.C. Marx]

Very sweet, your friend is lucky you care so much about her...great job :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

ya i love her so much that why wrote it for her she's the reason that I walk up in the morning ^^

[C.C. Marx]

That's great, everyone deserves that special someone in there life but sadly for me #singlegirlprobs

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

I'm single for now but I'm trying my best to win her heart

[C.C. Marx]

I'm sure she will realize how much you care and everything will work out....be patient :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

okay thanks :D

[C.C. Marx]

No problem good luck :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks

[beautiful dreamer]

very very good! such a cute little write! i wish someone would write something like this about me :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

awes maybe some day someone will :)

[beautiful dreamer]

maybe.. i doubt it but maybe

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

I know you will :D

[beautiful dreamer]

aw thanks

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

your welcome

[Victoria Elizabeth]

very good, I love this keep it up!!

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you so much and I will keep it up :D I just love writing ^^