who are you

holding back tears

pain closing inside

don't know what to fear

gone before my eyes

don't wanna drag on the years

wishing I knew, why I'm crying

disappearing before I could say hi

understanding why your gone

is it a mistake; why you died?

everything seems to be all wrong

never met, still hard to say good-bye

sorry I'm not strong

Reviews

[Faffy]

wow im sorry to hear that =( your poem isnt just a representation of your emotions it is a powerful embodiment of what you were going though and how you felt and your emotions. its very well written i love that so much power and emotion can be locked away in something that is as short as this! i hope you are feeling better now i know losing somebody is hard for anybody

amazing read thanks for sharing =)

Roshan

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you

[Arun.J]

:'( nice! ...
I feel the pain, through your words........

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks, I wrote this for my cousin that died last year and I never got to met him