hrut

if hrut and lost is a part of life then dese how dese it take the last brith out of you went you know that deeo know that its never goign to get better the popel we bcome is just a shell of hrut lost broken feeling thogtu out our life the only thing that has meaning it love is blood with out there could be know life or death. you wish for death he who walk the river of blood as mark you for life. you how wish for life the wing of light will be there to gien you in your time of need.

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[SOUL LESS]

OKay, I'll translate: (for all those who can't read this...review it again!)
Hurt and loss is a part of life. When these take the last breath out of you, you know that its never going to get better. The people we become are just shells of hurt, lost broken feelings. Reflecting on our life, the only thing that has meaning or love is blood with out which there could be no life or death. You wish for death- marked for life as he who walks the river of blood. How you wish for the wing of light to be in your life, to always be there to guide you in your time of need...

I tried...sorry if i reduced the quality a little :)

[A Risen Heroine.]

I can't read a thing...
Too many spell errors...
I'm sorry...

[SOUL LESS]

Wow...nicely said. Quite a simple little passage, but carries a lot of meaning. The wing of light...Orlando summed it up quite nicely. You should write more often :)

[Orlando Murcia]

Beautiful...