love wing

Death is to hell
As
Heaven is to earth
With out love we are doing but 
dust in the wing

Author's Note

world are only latter, looking is only see read beting the line and you will fine the sorty with in

Reviews

[The 13th Eros]

You paint the past, present and future with the sighs of eternity, and love is the depth and beauty of all that gives us breath.

[poems with feeling]

not all love is like that

[Patrick Henry]

Is this like "Dust in the Wind"? Where do you get the idea to write this poem? I think going between Heaven and Hell, the last line would look really cool and make a statement with being read as "Dust ON the Wing". I like it. xoxo -Mark

[Call Me Blu]

This is really good. Short and snappy. A little typo I don't think you meant to say doing but oh well :)

[stars are far]

really nice ... good work

[J.Carnevale]

its short sweet and to the point. i like it

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

Short and deep really cool!

[Hello, Goodbye]

love the brevity.. there is much power in it..

[Ashley Myers]

Death is to hell as heaven is to earth, i love that line!

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

i like this poem. its short, but to the point. keep writing.