vocie

maybe be the last poem i put up for a long time

 

 There this voice in side my head, a  feeling in my gut,  same  kind of peace at lest thereknow  word that can  expaln it,  yet there this worry  that I don’t  have mush time life on  this earth  for what I have done , the voice in my head told me  there meet be  one way  to save  this  soul   from the devil him slef ,   to take  all the  suffing  I have sauce give me peace at last

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

You are peeling away at layers of my own heart I thought to be unimportant. As many are the days behind and before me, I wonder in moments of hugs with Loved ones, wondering my connection to all things interacted with, and then coming across a girl like you on here who makes me feel like I am normal for thinking what I think!! xo I wonder what my last numbered day is and I wish I did not wonder things like that, ever. I watch the "Long Island Medium" on the TV and she sees people who have crossed over from even centuries past!! My mom would have considered that Satanic or even witchcraft in my younger years, but has since known people in the Wiccan faith, and thinks of them as friends to her now. I Love how you just write exactly the train of thought that I have had in my OWN life, and can recall the thought in its entirety because of what you have shared of yourself. Beautiful, Lacy.... again!! lol xoxo -Your Mark

[Call Me Blu]

This is really good. It's really dark. I would love to see you try and writee an uplifting happy poem.

[Hello, Goodbye]

nice..

[astoundinglyattractive]

i think you meant 'voice' a the title, not 'voice'
otherwise, this is a good write, a good read.
still standing in the 'you need to proofread' zone
but i really do like your poems (:

[poems with feeling]

thax :p ;p lol i wantz just not let i have samething that i have to life for

[SOUL LESS]

Just dun kill yourself. lol...it's ok. Dun worry about ur time on earth. Just make all the use u can, i mean we're doomed in 2012 aren't we:P