heaven, hell

 

There is know where on this earth where I belong

 Dear heaven this soul  I was  been bron with is no good

Neither 

heaven or hell wont let me in with this soul I have been give

 

is this soul iv been give dammed to walk this earth

dammed  to who all want to me around this cursed soul iv been give

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I don't know how you pull such beauty from words that set=up for a nightmare!! As if reading a horror mystery or novel, this poem climaxes and finishes beautifully and on so dark a tone, too. I love it!! Feeling disconnected from the world, just means you have started to recognize where strengths and failures EXIST!! Beautiful poems with feeling. xoxo -Mark

[Jamie Reading]

Very well done, very emotional. very well portrayed of no sense of belonging.

[Dream Slave]

Heaven doesn't want you, Hell can't have you... Sounds like someone who will become a ghost... No feeling of accomplishment.

[Ashley Myers]

your thoughts are very well portrayed in this piece. i like it

[cfix]

Wow this is very powerful,
Your feelings are well presented.