dear firend

i write this for a firend to show him that i kind

can you hear it? can you see it? i can. you can try and hide it but deep down it is killing you. you make everyone around you smile. from  your pesonality- ever yourself. but deep down your lost in youself trying to dig your way out to true happiness.

                         To my  true friend joey

Reviews

[Call Me Blu]

This poem has the best emotion of all of yours. You have a tyle to your writing that I love. Keep writing!

[KateJadzia]

Only true friends are able to (literally) feel their friends’ deepest feelings.
This poem makes me feel what you are feeling.

[Ashley Myers]

its sad to see one of your friends hiding the way they feel. fake smiles can fool some, but a true friend sees through it

[poems with feeling]

thax world can make this world a better place to live

[Apathy To Empathy]

it makes me sad but have hope to know how people can convey such emotions in so little words. I like your style. Thank you for posting!