shhhh dont tell a soul

this poem as more meaning them anyone could ever know is so powerful that i had to put it down for a few day then fight it

The soul if the unborn could be the most powerful thing in the world. The thought of the unborn lies deep in the mind of the them who are damed to this earth for as long as time will live on. 

The unborn soul is so powerful it's hard for one to forget about the unborn. the soul lies in the depth of your soul and the one  you love. It takes two souls to bring this unborn soul into this time of everlasting night.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I borrow on the role of a hero's role to try an understand what MY soul means to me from time to time.... As we weren't brought here, but we were born into this existence, it is quite a thing to see it written beautifully in your writing!! I have cheated myself in the younger years to take careless steps in defying what my own life means to me. I didn't seek out and recognize words that would protect how important this life to me could be defined as, and I was surely not as lucky to come across a girl like you who could explain to me, in parts, just how special my potential could have been. Beautiful, Lacy!! xoxo -Mark

[Dilan Gray]

I like this poem, it is very unique.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Wow I really liked this poem the way it has been structured and it has great flow and the powerfulness of your words are truly inspirational I look forward to reading more of your work well done

[steph]

the soul lies in the depth of your soul and the one you love. It takes two souls to bring this unborn soul into this time of everlasting night.
This is my my favorite line of the poem I love how you paint with such volumes and depths with so few words. I believe this is definately one of my favorites, and I look foward to reading your work... Excellent job

[Hello, Goodbye]

curiously full of precise purpose..

[cfix]

Very well done,
I like the last two lines the best.
This is a very well written write.
Nicely done!