shhhh dont tell a soul

this poem as more meaning them anyone could ever know is so powerful that i had to put it down for a few day then fight it

The soul if the unborn could be the most powerful thing in the world. The thought of the unborn lies deep in the mind of the them who are damed to this earth for as long as time will live on. 

The unborn soul is so powerful it's hard for one to forget about the unborn. the soul lies in the depth of your soul and the one  you love. It takes two souls to bring this unborn soul into this time of everlasting night.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I borrow on the role of a hero's role to try an understand what MY soul means to me from time to time.... As we weren't brought here, but we were born into this existence, it is quite a thing to see it written beautifully in your writing!! I have cheated myself in the younger years to take careless steps in defying what my own life means to me. I didn't seek out and recognize words that would protect how important this life to me could be defined as, and I was surely not as lucky to come across a girl like you who could explain to me, in parts, just how special my potential could have been. Beautiful, Lacy!! xoxo -Mark

[Echoes of Eros]

In every line, you create such a powerful imagery that sparks something eternal in your words. This is amazing, lacy. Keep writing and letting the words take you over.

[MoriartyMesa]

What I took away from this was something of a strange regret, nothing could prompt this sort of writing. Nice work

[Chaos_Collector]

This poem is short yet it says ever so much. It's a great quality and the meaning behind this poem is truly sacred. Well done

Chaos_Collector

[poems with feeling]

that is one of my best work i still love it to these dayt

[Chaos_Collector]

I can definitely see why you'd still love it. It's priceless

[poems with feeling]

blood and yearn i love tho one as well

[Chaos_Collector]

Cool, I'll swing by em now

[poems with feeling]

cool cool

[Chaos_Collector]

:)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

quite deep... Good one

[Havthoveen]

so short and banging

[Ashley Myers]

your best piece by far!

[poems with feeling]

i see that this is your fav poem of mine im glad cuz this is my best poem i ever write

[Sydney Evans]

This says a lot and has good emotion!

[J. C. Koch]

In the first line, should it be "of the unborn"??
And also wouldn't it be damned??
Sorry to be a grammar nazi, but those two spots really stood out when reading the poem. It has an interesting message.