fear

As the sun fall upon the last few minutes o flight of day. comes the fear of the night where the night comes to life take over that you know is real. gives life to the thing we fear deep down in our soul. they come out to play in the depths of the nigh. they are mot afraid for you though, you my ask why this is. well we cant't tell you this because u have to answer for yourself. i have found my answer though it all, it's you , the one that been hiding behind the darknes, hiding behind the light in my eyes. as

Reviews

[Ashley Myers]

your poems are great so please dont take this the wrong way. your poems are beautiful, but it's overshadowed by some grammatical errors. I don't ever really pick on grammar because i myself am not perfect; however, heres a suggestion. Type your poems up in microsoft word or even wordpad, and do a spell and grammar check on it. sometimes when we don't catch things, this tool does the fixing for you. it took me a while to read this one because i was trying to figure out what some of the words were suppose to say. your poems are too beautiful to be overshadowed by something as small as grammatical errors. really though, word can help you! than all you have to do when your finished is copy and paste it on here!! keep up the good work!!

[poems with feeling]

ya that my fav part to i wrtie these poem for same on that is rly dear to me ;)

[steph]

This is another great piece, you have definately captured the esscence of fear using so few words... you are very articulate, and you have made fear into a tangable thing to feel and look at, as well as heightened the sences when its read... Excellent Read

[cfix]

I like this all because of the ending,
You close it off with an "As"
Very nicely and creative.
Love the emotions as well.
Nicely done!