another love poem

your love warms me like a burning fire

the words you in my ear are so tender

everything about you, i cant help but admire

your love is a mind bender

open your heart and show me all your desires

i cant hep but fall under your spell

if it werent for you i'd be lost

when im away from you, my life is hell

id stay with you no matter what cost

 

 

Cherri

 

 

 

Author's Note

any suggestions for improvment, id like to hear them please :)

Reviews

[Flo_writer]

Everything about you I can't help but to admire
You love is a mind bender
It warms me like a burning fire
The words you whisper in my ears are so tender
That I can't help but to fall deeply under spell
Please open your heart and show me all your desires
Because if it wasn't for you I would be lost
When I'm away from you my life feels like hell
I will stay with you no matter the cost.

[Flo_writer]

I rearranged it to see if you would like it better that way which is my only suggestion. Either way it's a beautiful poem and I hope the person that inspired it deserves the time and creativity of it.well done