indifferent

indifferent

A Poem by XxXCherriXxX
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the emotion " indifferent" poem

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you seem so indifferent towards me.

show me how your really feeling.

you act so uncaring for everyone around you.

show your friend how you really feel

you act so unconcerned about your life

show yourself how you feel

you seem Unsympathetic towards people in pain

show them you know how to feel symapthy.

dont pretend your Insensitive

becouse i've seen the real you

time for you to show how you really feel.

 time for you to show your not ~

indifferent

uncaring

unconcerned

unsympathetic

Insesnsitive

 

 

© 2009 XxXCherriXxX


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I like the way u wrote this,great write

Posted 15 Years Ago


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It revolves around the concept 'Be yourself'
hehe

I enjoyed it!

Nice write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


WoW ... I really really like this poem :) :D
Very very nice indeed :D
I can totally relate in a way :)
But it's really really good ... you did a great job with it ;)
You should be proud :) :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aww, that's cute lol. The person, talking in the poem, knows how the other really is, and is helping this other person reach out. That's what I got out of it =] Correct me if I'm wrong

Posted 15 Years Ago


Awesome! I really like this; you made it really blunt and straightforward.
Thanks for writing it. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2009

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i'm 16 and LOVE writing i kinda cant wait to be 17. woot if you send me a message with an emotion i could write a poem in a split second... so please go ahead and send me a message obj=new Obj.. more..

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