Crying with joy, stiffling anger that eventually comes out, with loyalty of a heart that does not just cast away those who may have cast the writer off. The person she loves is gone, has spoken both kind words and words of betrayal. Yet, even so, the writer has the virtue of love...something that does not simply vanish. Beautiful and so full of emotions. I really related to this Cherri. Great write. Thanks for sharing, barb. Oh I almost forgot the line towards the bottom, nice,mean,sad, all hurt. Great metaphore. Barb.
Crying with joy, stiffling anger that eventually comes out, with loyalty of a heart that does not just cast away those who may have cast the writer off. The person she loves is gone, has spoken both kind words and words of betrayal. Yet, even so, the writer has the virtue of love...something that does not simply vanish. Beautiful and so full of emotions. I really related to this Cherri. Great write. Thanks for sharing, barb. Oh I almost forgot the line towards the bottom, nice,mean,sad, all hurt. Great metaphore. Barb.
i'm 16 and LOVE writing i kinda cant wait to be 17. woot
if you send me a message with an emotion i could write a poem in a split second... so please go ahead and send me a message
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