you always effect me

you always effect me

A Poem by XxXCherriXxX

no matter what you say.

nice or bad.

you'll always get a reaction.

wether crying or being in anger.

you'll get it.

you'll always have my heart. no matter what.

its hard to forget what we had.

the good and the bad....

but i am trying

to move

on

becouse i know you have

no matter where they live. far far away. she lives...

it hurts when you say nice,sad,mean things about me.

you still have me.

© 2009 XxXCherriXxX


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Crying with joy, stiffling anger that eventually comes out, with loyalty of a heart that does not just cast away those who may have cast the writer off. The person she loves is gone, has spoken both kind words and words of betrayal. Yet, even so, the writer has the virtue of love...something that does not simply vanish. Beautiful and so full of emotions. I really related to this Cherri. Great write. Thanks for sharing, barb. Oh I almost forgot the line towards the bottom, nice,mean,sad, all hurt. Great metaphore. Barb.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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"no matter what you say.
nice or bad.
you'll always get a reaction."

This is so true .. Nice message through this simple write .. like it

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crying with joy, stiffling anger that eventually comes out, with loyalty of a heart that does not just cast away those who may have cast the writer off. The person she loves is gone, has spoken both kind words and words of betrayal. Yet, even so, the writer has the virtue of love...something that does not simply vanish. Beautiful and so full of emotions. I really related to this Cherri. Great write. Thanks for sharing, barb. Oh I almost forgot the line towards the bottom, nice,mean,sad, all hurt. Great metaphore. Barb.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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i'm 16 and LOVE writing i kinda cant wait to be 17. woot if you send me a message with an emotion i could write a poem in a split second... so please go ahead and send me a message obj=new Obj.. more..

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