i need you

I need you

like i need air

i need you

like i need air

your one of those people i cant live without. you mean so much i might just start to drown,

in my tears of sorrow. when i begin to realize i could lose you.

your my knight in shining armer.

you've protected me, you've made me cry. you made me realize

i could die without you.

no matter what you say or do. i'll stick it out with you.

make sure your never sad. make sure your never lonley.

to make sure all you ever need is a hug.

i want to be with you, i want to kiss you. i want to hold you. i's already sold.

you've made up my mind for me.

i want to stay with you forever. as freinds or more. i dont care. but please dont ever let it be enemies.

becouse that would cut off my air.

and i would die without it.

i would die without you

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!! Awesome !!!
What A Great Piece Of Writing Indeed !!! Most Definately !!!
Loved It !!! Definately Gonna Be A Favorite Of Mine For Time To Come !!!

"i could die without you.
no matter what you say or do. i'll stick it out with you.
make sure your never sad. make sure your never lonley.
to make sure all you ever need is a hug.
i want to be with you, i want to kiss you. i want to hold you. i's already sold.
you've made up my mind for me.
i want to stay with you forever. as freinds or more. i dont care. but please dont ever let it be enemies.
becouse that would cut off my air.
and i would die without it.
i would die without you "

Just So Completely Wonderful !!!
Beautiful !!!

[XxXCherriXxX]

thank you for all the great reviews! i am taking them with a open heart and a giant smile

[Adaora]

This was very strong (in my opinion). I could genuinely smell the desperation.

[Song of Mercy]

Another powerful piece. Full of emotions we have, or at least I have, felt in life. I would tell you to keep it real but you are already doing that. Thank you for sharing. Barb.

[XxXCherriXxX]

dude i didnt even notice those :O
good catch.
i
ll over look my poems three times next time

[@zeewhykay]

Other than the spelling (which isn't a big deal, as long as you are understood) I thought this was really good !

'' i's already sold.

you've made up my mind for me. ''

Small small edit here would only do you great good. ''I'm already sold''

Good work, keep on keeping on ;)