angel?

you say i was your angel

but was i really?

you said i was your life

you said i was your angel

hearing the things you called me make me wonder.

i hear you loved someone else.

i hear you hated me, and how i acted.

i hear you said you'd leave me in second.

i hear you said i wasnt your life

i've decided i was never your angel.

i've decided i was never your love.

i've decided i was never your life.

 

you lied to me about everything...

and i can say i hate you for that.

you pretened you dont notice i;m i human

i have emotions too

i feel happy,sad,hurt,hate,disapointed

that i believed you....

i can't believe you could look at me and pretened we never happened....

Reviews

[Vincent A. Beasley]

I understand this very well, even though I'm a guy. This kinda thing happened to me not to long ago. I love how you put all of the "You said, I hear you, I've decided" together. It helped to keep the whole idea glued to itself. It's very good and even though it's been done before, I couldn't help thinking to myself that this has personally happened to you. I like =]

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a sad write with alot of emotions but well written

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
Such Emotion That Just Seems To Drip From The Page !!!

"i hear you loved someone else.
i hear you hated me, and how i acted.
i hear you said you'd leave me in second.
i hear you said i wasnt your life"

WoW !!!
Such Pain Indeed !!!
So Beautifully Written Down !!!

[Song of Mercy]

I have been there. I loved for 10 years and now it is as if I did not exist. How can you love someone and then not love them? For me, each exchange with the kids is crushing. I feel used. That is the feeling that this poem brought to me. I really love anything that highlights life in such away that even those that have not experienced the subject. This poem does that. In my mind that makes it art. I love your work. Thank you. Barb