Warrior

There's a hurricane

brewing in my heart.

Any second now, it will burst.

Ready to unleash every inside.

Finally,

Everything I see is crystal clear.

Nothing can keep me from

conquering my fear.

I may not have won every battle.

But I have won this final war.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Before I forget to mention it – LAST LINE: do you mean “won” instead of “one”!??! Thank you for read requesting me. I don’t see you here in my newsfeed much, so I might forget to read you (I’m old & forgetful), or I might not notice you’ve posted something new. I always enjoy seeing a new poem from you here. I love the way you use the motif of a warrior when thinking about how to attack life. Your words are a huge inspiration for people who are feeling down & out. Sometimes we need to keep pushing ahead & not worry about the places where we faltered. The last two lines really hit home! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Wonderland Asylum]

Thank you for pointing that out to me, I didn't notice it before.

As for newer poems, I haven't really been writing as much, and if you have read my piece, Spirals, you'd get why.

I always look forward to your reviews, Margie. You always know just what to say.

[barleygirl]

Yes I did read that . . . good one . . . I understand . . .

[wordman]

i think we was meant to be in a war most of our lives
seems we are fighting with our hearts most of the time

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

You're right, the most important is to win the war. And it's like a brave warrior talking. Well done friend!!!!!!