"Your Actions covered up your Thoughts.
Made me feel like a Girl Who Was Wanted .
Caused me, who used to be such a Queen, who
Didn’t Need a King,
Caused my Own heart,
to be
OverThrown."
This was a very heartfelt poem! It was so relatable! I love your writing style. It's unique and it hooks the reader start to finish! You have a talent and it should be shared with everyone! You are one of the best writers that I've come across on this sight! keep up the incredible work!
Your friend,
C. Lee Battaglia
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
C. Lee Battaglia, thank-you so much!
It means a lot to me when you say that I'm one of the be.. read moreC. Lee Battaglia, thank-you so much!
It means a lot to me when you say that I'm one of the best writers that you've come across. In my own eyes, I'm a mere amature at writing, so your kind words are very much appreciated!
6 Years Ago
I really meant it! You are very welcome! And thanks once again for your incredible poetry!
"Your Actions covered up your Thoughts.
Made me feel like a Girl Who Was Wanted .
Caused me, who used to be such a Queen, who
Didn’t Need a King,
Caused my Own heart,
to be
OverThrown."
This was a very heartfelt poem! It was so relatable! I love your writing style. It's unique and it hooks the reader start to finish! You have a talent and it should be shared with everyone! You are one of the best writers that I've come across on this sight! keep up the incredible work!
Your friend,
C. Lee Battaglia
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
C. Lee Battaglia, thank-you so much!
It means a lot to me when you say that I'm one of the be.. read moreC. Lee Battaglia, thank-you so much!
It means a lot to me when you say that I'm one of the best writers that you've come across. In my own eyes, I'm a mere amature at writing, so your kind words are very much appreciated!
6 Years Ago
I really meant it! You are very welcome! And thanks once again for your incredible poetry!
When you meet some one that rocks your world and occupies all of your thoughts through the storms they create, an innocent girl is bound to feel over thrown from her own heart. Beautiful writing. I enjoyed reading your poem. All the best.
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