OverThrown

OverThrown

A Poem by Wonderland Asylum

Feelings came over me like a

storm for you.

Haven’t felt this storm in

A few years now.

Wanted to get close to you

but stuck viewing and admiring from afar.

Thought you had felt something

As well.

Why else would you have started

talking to me?

Unless, of course, your intentions

were impure.  Simply moving from one subject to another.

Thought that this would actually

become something Great.

Unfortunately you had Different plans.

Told me things I didn’t realize I Wanted to hear.

The way you Held me, I felt so

Safe, so Secure.

Your Actions covered up your Thoughts.

Made me feel like a Girl Who Was Wanted .

Caused me, who used to be such a Queen, who

Didn’t Need a King,

Caused my Own heart,

to be

OverThrown.

© 2018 Wonderland Asylum


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"Your Actions covered up your Thoughts.
Made me feel like a Girl Who Was Wanted .
Caused me, who used to be such a Queen, who
Didn’t Need a King,
Caused my Own heart,
to be
OverThrown."

This was a very heartfelt poem! It was so relatable! I love your writing style. It's unique and it hooks the reader start to finish! You have a talent and it should be shared with everyone! You are one of the best writers that I've come across on this sight! keep up the incredible work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderland Asylum

6 Years Ago

C. Lee Battaglia, thank-you so much!
It means a lot to me when you say that I'm one of the be.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

I really meant it! You are very welcome! And thanks once again for your incredible poetry!



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so hearty. u almost embarrassed me with that degree of naivete and heartfelt-ness. i'm broken

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I sorta feel this is the core of the person

Unless, of course, your intentions

were impure.

The way you Held me, I felt so

Safe, so Secure.

It even rhymes, which signals in my head, that it's related.

Could you imagine, how one would feel, "you're so safe and secure...but impure"

That would be a mindfuck, for sure

I like the rawness to this. There are no queens, or kings

only pimps and w****s

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderland Asylum

6 Years Ago

The majority of my work is based on my personal experiences, they all have a raw or genuine feeling... read more
Alessander

6 Years Ago

I understand. I liked this most from your poems.
This was good. Your feelings of longing and young betrayal shine through very well. It gives the sense of youth and the sometimes overpowering emotions that you don't realize until later in life were pretty trivial. Well done, thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's sad and beautiful, Emo Cat. Was this based on a personal experience?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderland Asylum

6 Years Ago

EJH Horror, yes, this poem is actually based off of a personal experience, but one that happened mon.. read more
I am not so into poetry but from time to time, I read some.. that was amazing, well chosen title too
I enjoyed it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I live the reference to the storm the raging passion within- what a wonderful feeling- nothing better- but sometimes we expect too much before we even know where things are going and disappoint ourselves and then there are those who give us false hopes as they are lost themselves- rejection can be a blessing in disguise- plenty fish in the sea rather wait for right one- love the words u used🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good job. cleverly compelling thoughts. we follow our hearts but must be careful. things aren't always as they appear on the surface but deep down the heart always knows. never easy but all's fair in love and war ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Many times I find love poems leap to an advanced point in the situation too quickly for my liking. What I loved about reading your poem is the way you crafted a gradual approach with no jolts, your words like a graceful cat approaching the desired culmination of your message. Many times I'm not a fan of using capitalization for emphasis, but the way you did it works well (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Complex feelings, thoughts, and emotions are written here. It's like temptation is warring with caution and desire with questions unanswered - perhaps reluctant of it? Probably shouldn't make this comparison but the ending, beginning with the reference to the Queen reminds me of Cleopatra's story about her kingdom being overthrown by her love. Reason I bring it up though is for the caution has a place but how far you believe it is necessary is up to you. The heart and the mind, an amazing thing to listen to.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the story in the poem my friend. Sweetness and temptation can brake down walls of safety. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Wonderland Asylum
Wonderland Asylum

Reedley, CA



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Alternative, shy, loves music. I typically keep to myself, and am not very expressive. But when I write, it's like I'm some place else. I've been gone for a while, and I'm working on getting back.. more..

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