Lustrious

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One with a voice so sweet,

birds fall silent in awe.

 

A beauty so bright,

the stars appear dim in comparison.

 

A mind so brilliant,

Einstein fell in amazement.

 

A heart so loving,

priest fall in jealousy and repent.

 

A laugh so sweet,

candy seem bitter.

 

A touch so gentle,

cotton scratches like steel.

 

A kiss so pleasant,

heaven falls short in comparison.

Author's Note

For someone special to me.

Reviews

[DreamyKari]

I have to say it was beautifully well written...There is nothing else to say or add

[Claudia Stark]

Very sweet, I'm sure they loved it.

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is so sweet and lovely.

[Mai]

nice :)

[Time's The Bond]

YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN MY DEAR FRIEND!

[Fréyjä Helv..]

"A beauty so bight (bright)" not sure thought if the word bight exists... But apart from that, the comparisons were well thought of...

[***The Lost***]

Thanks for telling me.

[Tasha]

This is truly beautiful. Whoever this is for must really feel special.

~Tasha

[Cleo]

Beautiful

[Beverly Jane]

Awww!!! That is completely beautiful. I love it so. Very amazing write, so many well written comparisons. That make this special someone, seem like an angel, or maybe even great. Just plain wonderful. I love it. :)

[Felicity's Eve]

This is incredible! Very lovely :)