Butterfly Wings

My first poem<3 :3

Gentle hues and vibrant flutters,

waltz along the fields of dreams.

Base of sapphire,

and lines of black

paint the glorious wings.

Roses, lilies, and any between are a feast.

 

Sweet nectar of passion,

courses through me.

I watch its fluttering dance.

Floating among the dandilions,

is its power.

 

Beauty of innocence,

beauty of passion,

beauty of love

is its gifts.

 

For from the earth it came

and in the earth it shall lay.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Abby]

I love this one. It has a very beautiful flow to it, and I really enjoyed reading this. Great job. :)

[The Invisible Girl]

I love this!! It is a very beautiful poem! Keep it up! :) 100/100
-Invizzy XD

[Beverly Jane]

Very beautiful, I feel as if I have a emotional tie to this. This is wonderful, I love it. Extremely great job. :)

[Felicity's Eve]

So lovely. I feel as if I can actually see the butterfly!

I've always loved those little creatures. So elegant :)

Wonderful write! I look forward to reading more of your work.

[***The Lost***]

I just want to thank you all for your kind words!

[saroosh]

this is beautifull!! looking forward to read more stuff from you keep it up :)

[esperanza]

I love it !

[***The Lost***]

Thank you!!! :3

[esperanza]

Your welcome do you think you could review some of my writing and tell me how I'm doing please .

[***The Lost***]

Sure, it wouldn't be a problem.

[Someones_Heartbreak]

I love this!

[***The Lost***]

Thank you! I hope I have more great reviews, its my first time actually sharing things I write. I hope to improve.

[Someones_Heartbreak]

Well it was great! For your first

[***The Lost***]

It feels me with joy to hear your praise. I will write more, but for now I will wait for my muse. The world is an empty canvas waiting to be filled, I will sure the next comes forth far greater than the first.