Invisible

 Invisible

 

I walk by you in the hallway

But you never look my way

 

You play this like

It's just another silly game

 

Why won't you look me

In the eye

And tell me

What you are really feeling

 

And when you're just about to

They all come crashing in

The people you call your friends

 

I am just so

Invisible

To you

 

You never see me

Like you know you should

 

I am just so

Invisible

To you

 

You never treat me

Like you know you should

 

You kick me

When I'm already on the ground

 

Why won't you

Let me in

You know you want to

So what is holding you back

 

 

I am just so

Invisible

To you

 

You never see me

Like you know you should

 

I am just so

Invisible

To you

 

You never treat me

Like you know you should

 

Please

Just let me in

Author's Note

Anything would be great! Thanks!

Reviews

[GetTheHellOut]

Being invisible hurts especially when you do your best for others to notice you, especially if that is the one you love. Nice poem. Good work.

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

awwww....very heart breaking.... okay, let's just get this out in the open...most guys are b*****s!!!! and obviously the guy in here is!!! and i call him that cause he thinks he's better than you....or at least it seems like that.... anyways, this was a great write!!!

~may

[satanic666]

let her in damnit...... maybe hes not worth ur time