Used to be

Used to be

A Poem by ℰmerald ⚓

You used to always be by my side,
Now your never there...

You used to always talk to me,
Now you refuse to speak...

You used to laugh uncontrollably,
Now you're so quiet...

You used to say forever,
And I used to say always.
Now we say it together,
Never.

© 2012 ℰmerald ⚓


Author's Note

ℰmerald ⚓
Inspiration: bad memories..

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It truly is sad when something like this changes someones perspective on something or someone. In the last paragraph, I have a question for you. Do you mean to say "You used to say forever"? You wrote "You used to forever". I hope this might provide some clarification of some sort ( for reader or writer). The color you chose for writing this poem in automatically grabs a readers attention. Why on earth would you pick that color? Well, I think it's because it's about a relationship but I might be the only one who see's that. Anyhow, the tile also plays a hand in grabbing the readers attention. Often, if I want to write a new poem, I just write a title and go from there. I feel like your title was made along with the poem, maybe even afterwards. Don;t give up hope that maybe someone mentioned in this poem will turn back around or your memories will wither fade or be swiftly changed to good. I'm sorry that you had to go through this and have bad memories to prove it but life is difficult and full of mysteries to answer. I hope more people review this poem.

Best regards,

Dell

Posted 12 Years Ago


ℰmerald ⚓

12 Years Ago

Thank you, yes I meant to put "you used to say forever" thanks for pointing that out to me. I chose .. read more
Phillitup

12 Years Ago

Of course! I'm glad I could be of help. That makes sense, beautiful memories to go along with the sa.. read more

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Added on November 27, 2012
Last Updated on December 16, 2012
Tags: people, change, past

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ℰmerald ⚓
ℰmerald ⚓

Motionless in Dreamstate., CA



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I don't post as much as I used to, I'll trash most of the songs I write because I always compare them to my favorite bands' music and it just never seems good enough. I don't think my poems and stori.. more..

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