Love

Love

A Poem by ℰmerald ⚓

You said "I love you"
I admit I said it too

The only difference is

I didn't lie to you
My love was true
Now it is gone like the wind
Nails through me pinned

You put me through a torturous state
With my true love await


© 2012 ℰmerald ⚓


Author's Note

ℰmerald ⚓
Inspiration: last year.

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Your heartbreak is apparent in your beautiful words. Only a true literary master could bring forth so much emotion in so few words, which you have done so here. Well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ℰmerald ⚓

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Great imagery.. "Nails through me pinned" gives us an idea of the pain you went though.. There may be just a few words but the feelings of heartbreak they present when put together is amazing. Great work..

Posted 12 Years Ago


ℰmerald ⚓

12 Years Ago

thank you
Wow, great poem. Really enjoyed reading it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think many people could relate :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 27, 2012
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ℰmerald ⚓
ℰmerald ⚓

Motionless in Dreamstate., CA



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