Falling in Love

Falling in love

Is very dangerous

Is very scary

Is very risky 

You will either end up happy

Or heartbroken 

You don't get to choose

It just happens

But sometimes

It's worth it 

It's worth the risk

But sometimes 

It's not worth it

It's not worth the risk 

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Much truth in this piece, but taking a chance to have love
I would risk every time no doubt, please read my piece hidden hearts
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

[jse]

In this poem, you do an excellent job of expressing the complexity of emotion and apprehension we feel about love. I especially like the structure of your poem. The short lines and vertical structure made me think of standing at a great height, which led me to think about falling from a great height. This made feel the fear of falling love that you mentioned in first stanza. Excellent work!

Perhaps you can experiment with the spacing to further accentuate the poems vertically and produce a falling effect. You did a great job! I would love to read more of your poetry.

[EmmaELJ2001]

I used word docs to make the word falling actually look like the letters were falling from the top of the page. It looked neat and I printed out tons of copies. Thank you

[jse]

Your welcome Emma. I'm I could help.

[RAOrourke]

Very nice & true poem! So true of love, great job depicting this