The Kiss

The best kiss I ever received. I can't forget it ever

The first time I felt your lips
I thought it was merely a dream
I opened my eyes and to my surprise
The most handsome eyes I've ever seen.

I don't know why you love me
But because of that I know dreams come true
All I want is love and devotion
Honesty and faithfulness from you.

Since that very first day we kissed
I just couldn't let it go
I'd found a love to last forever
And so much to experience and know.

I couldn't believe what I was staring at
You stole my heart away
I love you with all my heart
More and more each day.

Whenever things get really rough
And there's times I begin to miss
I just close my eyes and begin to dream
And remember our first kiss.

I can't remember any kisses before you
But it doesn't matter now
I still can't believe it
The feelings in that kiss I had found.

It all just came in one day
Two people who were perfect together
And I found it all in one precious touch
In that priceless kiss of forever.

Reviews

[EMP]

really good poem! i love the structure, the rhyme scheme and the imagery you've created. a powerful first piece, i enjoyed reading this. well done :)

[The Raven King]

It sounds like there is a lot of passion in this poem. I would suggest trying to get a rhythm going in your poem. Read them aloud and if it doesn't seem to flow then try to see where it gets iffy and see if you can fix it without changing the meaning of your poem. the last stanza flows fantastically. good job. keep writing!!!