Sometimes I wonder...

Poem of questioning after the one you spent so much of your life with leaves. The gradual realisation that you no longer care...

Sometimes I wonder,

Whether you ever felt the same.

Sometimes I wonder,

Whether you even cared.

Sometimes I wonder,

Where you are now.

Sometimes I wonder,

Why we even met.

 

Sometimes I wonder,

Why kissing you meant so much to me.

Sometimes I wonder,

Whether you knew I was the one you were kissing.

Sometimes I wonder,

What my life would've been like without you.

Sometimes I wonder,

Whether I’d be the same.

 

Sometimes I wonder,

While I lie in bed alone.

Sometimes I wonder,

Who you’re with tonight.

Sometimes I wonder,

Why I even care.

Sometimes I wonder,

Why is it I don’t?

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I'm sure every person has asked themselve's these questions once broken up with a sig other who they have been with for a certain amount of time. They are tough questions that are able to break us, but we should just ask them and let it go..don't even think about the answers, just move on and just realize that you can find someone who treats you better..who loves and accepts you for who you are.

[Last King Caradin]

Words fail me: it is marvellous

[Dez H.]

I like that poem, it was deep.

[Luciole]

I really liked this. And you know, sometimes it really is best to just forget about someone you weren't sure about because it isn't worth the pain. Nicely done

[Emrick]

you seem to worry alot.but thats normal to those in love.
Nice piece.

[ChervenkovaM]

Very nice :) Very emotional and true up to the last word. It's beautifully written and I like the repetition, it adds even more of that heavy emotion :)

[Distant horizons]

Yeah. Sometimes I wonder too. Excellent write.

[Tai Ryens]

Amazing lines, all relate-able to me and many, man other people out here in this forsaken world. I loved every single line of this poem, this was full of raw emotion. Keep it up!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Sometimes I wonder,
What my life would've been like without you.
Sometimes I wonder,
Whether I’d be the same.
....wonderful lines my dear. My best wishes.