Inside so deep

Inside so deep

A Poem by Sugar and Spice
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Song not poem... WritersCafe should add that option...

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Why don't you see me,
The way way I see you.
Why don't you love me,
The way I love you?

Don't, don't hold back,
Your feelings.
Don't, don't keep them locked inside.
Inside so dee-eep.
Inside so dee-eep.
Inside so deep.

Why is it just me who,
Makes the effort everyday?
Why can't you take over some days?

Why is it me?
Why is it me?
Why is it me?
Why is it me?

Oo-oo-oooo 
Oo-oo-oooo

Don't, don't hold back,
Your feelings. 
Don't, don't keep them locked inside.
Inside so dee-eep.
Inside so dee-eep.
Inside so deep.

Oo-oo-oooo
Oo-oo-oooo

Inside this shell.
Coz' thats who you are.
When you're with meeeeee.
Inside this shell.
Buried so deep.
Its hard to find.
The one I love....

Don't, don;t hold back,
Your feelings.
Don't, don't keep them locked inside.
Inside so dee-eep.
Inside so dee-eep.
Inside so deep!

© 2012 Sugar and Spice


Author's Note

Sugar and Spice
Duh its not a poem its a song. Spur of the moment thing that come to my head and I felt like writing it down :)

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I love the old saying.....Dont worry that the world will end today. Its already tomorrow in Australia....

I think we have similar styles...i like that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good. You are having a special capacity of writing poem. with regards.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I find this sad.sometimes i wish our chests were transparent,that feelings could be seen. .i think everybody would treat one another the way they like.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sugar and Spice

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia



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Hi My name is Emma :) Sugar and Spice is my WC name because it not only suits me, but my writing down to a t... As a young student, I was often praised for my stories and creativity, but criticised .. more..

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