Don't give up...

Don't give up...

A Poem by Sugar and Spice

Don't look back,
The wind is in your hair, 
Remember that the clouds always pass.
The sun is just around the corner...

Don't give up on your dreams,
The sky's the limit,
You just have to climb high...
...But you can do it.

You are somebody,
Someone wishes to be you.
To have what you do,
To be strong...

You make your life...
Don't give up.

© 2012 Sugar and Spice


Author's Note

Sugar and Spice
After all the super depreso stuff I wanted to try a different theme... dunno whether it works as well... reviews would be great!

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This is a very deep and inspirational piece! I really like the metaphor you have set up with the sun and the clouds in the first stanza, very simple yet very complex. Wonderful job here, keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

positivity always works Em. No matter if it only makes one person smile or a thousand, you have been responsible for making someone happy.
Great words, great attitude= great. :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sugar and Spice
Sugar and Spice

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia



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Hi My name is Emma :) Sugar and Spice is my WC name because it not only suits me, but my writing down to a t... As a young student, I was often praised for my stories and creativity, but criticised .. more..

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