Haters deal, coz I don't care :)

Haters deal, coz I don't care :)

A Poem by Sugar and Spice

Don't tell me you hate me,
That's your problem not mine...
I dare you to make me care,
Because honey, you don't mean nothing to me...

You think you've got it tough?
Girl I dare you to walk back through my darkness,
Lets see how long you'd last with a smile on your pretty face.

I won't stoop to you're level.
I refuse to call you names.
Learn to accept people for who they are. Please?
Because you'll meet loads of people on your journey,
And there will be some more messed up then me.

No I'm not an attention seeker.
Yes I wear my scars out in the open,
But that's not my fault.
Hell if I could go back to the days those were created I would.
Now they serve as a reminder.
A reminder about people like you...

So honey, I'll say again.
I dare you to try and get me to care.
Then again, don't waste your time... :)

© 2012 Sugar and Spice


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I like how you didn't personalize this to how you've been treated or why, but still made the clear statement that you should be accepted for who you are. People can be so affected by the opinions of others that they compromise who they are inside, when they should just accept that they can't please everyone and aim instead to just please themselves. This is a nice piece about being true to oneself and accepting others, regardless of scars. Well done. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like how you didn't personalize this to how you've been treated or why, but still made the clear statement that you should be accepted for who you are. People can be so affected by the opinions of others that they compromise who they are inside, when they should just accept that they can't please everyone and aim instead to just please themselves. This is a nice piece about being true to oneself and accepting others, regardless of scars. Well done. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Way to stand up and ignore the ignorant. I like this alot.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cold blooded. F**k a hater! Good s**t Spice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful emotions flowing through a really powerful write. I noticed that the fourth stanza could be interpreted in many different ways, whether in a form of self harm, or a form of emotional distress. Whichever meaning you mean, I'm sure it relates to a deep thought pondering in your thoughts.
Keep up the powerful work ~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many people waste so much effort trying to make others care instead of letting go. Hell, even I'm guilty, but keep that to yourself. Nicely done. Too many would have ruined it by venting their spleen into their write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sugar and Spice

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia



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