There will probably be many interpretations for this certain poem. It really is a nice poem. I love the metaphor embedded onto here, you made an overused concept into something symbolic and meaningful. A tad bit sentimental.
The way I see it however, you may need to wash away your past if you want to really proceed on with the future. That doesn't mean completely abandoning your past either.
Anyways, wonderful write. Keep it up.
It still makes me stop and think, every time I see my footprints being washed away by the waves, in spite of age, some child-wonder remains with-in...The title called me because of this and I'm glad I answered the call. You've managed to capture a live moment of the present (time) in this..I can almost hear the waves.
There will probably be many interpretations for this certain poem. It really is a nice poem. I love the metaphor embedded onto here, you made an overused concept into something symbolic and meaningful. A tad bit sentimental.
The way I see it however, you may need to wash away your past if you want to really proceed on with the future. That doesn't mean completely abandoning your past either.
Anyways, wonderful write. Keep it up.
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